The slow drifting wind
Slowly pushing against you
Feeling yourself go.
This is my Haiku Poem that our class has been working on. My Poem is about the wind, the wind makes me feel happy and relaxed. It makes me think of peaceful things to make me calm down when i am upset.
Hi Harry I really enjoy reading your are really liked how you describe what the wind was like on you and some really good describing words. I enjoy doing the Haiku poems to.
from Will
Hello,
Hi i am tash from 5DF. I was reading your post and i thought your three sentences were ok but it could have been longer. Wind makes me feel caim too. Next time try to make your words more descriptive instead of it made me relaxed.
I love your picture but I don’t know how it was related to your post about poemes and wind.
From tash.
Hi Harry,
I like how you gave a bit of a description of your poetry. Why did you choose the topic of wind?
From Charlie.
Hi Harry,
I love haiku poems! They always make me feel peaceful as well because I love nature; it’s very calming.
Is wind always calming, do you think?
Miss Davidson.
Hi harry,
I really liked your poem about the wind, I also like the wind, it’s so peaceful and interesting, I like the way you have been descriptive about it pushing against you and drifting away. I also really liked the picture that you added in. Good job!
From Zara
Hi Harry,
I really liked how it was very descriptive and you definitely thought very hard.
From Flynn
Hi Harry
Harry I liked your haiku poem because you put in lots of detail and over all it was a amazing poem.
Great job Pook from the funniest person in the class (pat)
Wow Harry!
That poem was so descriptive and calm. It really did make me calm down. It painted an amazing picture in my head. It made me think of the beach at dusk. Next time maybe add a question at the end, to keep the conversation going. Other than that, well done.
What did your poem make you think about?
From Grace
Hello Harry,
I think it’s wonderful that you can feel relaxed and calm whilst writing poems!
Do you have a favourite concrete poem?
From Joanna (Matilda)
Hello Harry!
My name is Maggie and I am a student in the United States of America.
I really enjoyed reading your poem and I think that it is cool that the wind can calm you down. I can tell that you put a lot of thought about your poem and I love the picture!
My blog is: http://maggiele2025.edublogs.org/